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Entre

And so we enter another dark day.
Some night and colour will mix and stir,
no one will be happy again.
So fire will lead unless it rains, but weather
will leave and another storm will not.
Yet, the sick and the old will return to
full strength, unless another blood sucker
steals it away.
Drip by drip the spirits come through.
All we can do is watch it go.
Heroes may promise, insist and dictate,
but no one will believe. The warmth will
cuddle us together, for one more storm may pass.
And us people may wonder, in hands and ponder,
we shall enter once more through your dark door.

Entre
©2003-2009 ~cloniee
:iconcloniee:

Author's Comments

The photo was taken by "Anti-self".....thank you.
As for the poem it was written a few months ago, at the end of the summer when I begun this journal, it is called "entre".

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:iconladygekko:
Nice poem. I really love it. Gorgeous images and feelings throughout.

LadyGekko.
:iconb00red:
yes. This is very beautifully composed. The photo suits the text very well. You dont stop amazing me.

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:iconzelfyr:
Like death, life has its place in the darkness of time. Only that we shall find it before it passes. Great thoughts, you write as good as you look.

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:flame: ZELFYR :flame:
I love comments. [link]
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picture of me,homepage
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:iconzelfyr:
I am missing your writing... I have commented on everything but a few of the "Comas" and since you are not continuing with them; I did not want to.
Is everything ok with you?
Please come say Hi.
Gigi

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:flame: ZELFYR :flame:
I love comments. [link]
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picture of me,homepage
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:iconzawadzki:
Oh man ur my hero!
nice pic of u by the way.

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